A Music Love Story Episode 1

29 08 2010

As I have promised you that this story will be up and running, and so I do keep my promises and now presenting to you:A Music Love Story Episode 1!

                                                A Music Love Story
                                                         Episode 1
                                       Sub Title:Being Late For School

          ‘ I am so excited for school tomorrow!’ Jonas said.’What is so great about Peanuts Secondary School By the way, I heard that  the school has alot of hooligans…,’ Hudson replied.’Well at least there is a school that will take us in not like  T.K.N.I.N.W.M. whose father forgot to submit the application form for school’ Jonas said.’Oh yeah!T.K.N.I.W.M. stands for  ‘That kid’s name is not worth mentioning’,right?’ Hudson said.’Yep’ Jonas replied.’Can’t talk now or else my mum will start nagging at me,’ Hudson said.’Bye’ they both said.After that,Jonas began to pack his bag for school.Then, he  watched late night television from 1am to 3am! Jonas wactched a show called ‘The Unpredictable
World’, it is a scientific show about alien from Mars.Then,Jonas went to sleep.
        ‘Ring! Ring!’ the alarm rang.Jonas reached for the alarm and saw that it was already 9am! He was supposed to be at school at 7am and he was late by 2 whole hours!Jonas quickly  changed into his school uniform and dashed out of his apartment without eating his  breakfast.Why didn’t his parents woke him up? His parents were at work, which had them to be at their work place by 5am.
        While runnning to catch the bus,all of a  sudden, a girl dashed out from the bushes and hit Jonas.The girl and Jonas did not really care about the accident. Apparently, both of them were heading to the same bus stop,taking the
same bus,heading the same route,heading the same school!They together rushed into their  classrooms.’Good Morning, Mrs Koh!’ They  said together.’Good morning Jonas and Cindy. Please take seat.’ Mrs Koh said. Jonas went to seat with Hudson.’Why were you late!?You  know you were supposed to be here at 7am.’ Hudson whispered.’Sorry! I overslept…’ Jonas replied.’But then, you were also lucky to have  miss what Mrs Koh have to say about the school rules and attire. By the way, how did you know  our form teacher was Mrs Koh?’ Hudson asked. ‘I saw the staff list at the school website.’Jonas replied while trying to catch his breathe.’Hey,  that girl came into class with you Do you know who she is?’ Hudson asked.’I bumbed into her  while catching the bus,’Jonas replied.After Mrs Koh has explained everything about Peanuts Secondary School.It is time for recess.’What  should we eat?’ Hudson asked while walking to the cafeteria.’How about trying….’ Jonas was accidently cut off of his talking because he knocked into the same girl who he had met  while trying to catch the bus.’Sorry’the girl said. ‘Its you!Hi, my name is Cindy.Whats your name?’ Cindy asked.’Oh yeah,I remember you! You were the same girl who I knocked into this morning. Hi, my name is Jonas and this friend here is  Hudson.’Jonas replied.’Hi Jonas and Hudson! This friend here is Yu Zhen.’Cindy said.’Hi Yuzhen!’Jonas said.Meet both of you at class later.’Jonas said. ‘Okay.Bye.’Cindy said while running to the  classroom with Yu Zhen.’Wow!Cindy is a friendly person!’ Jonas said.’Yeah and Yu Zhen is gorgeous!’ Hudson said while his saliva was drooling.’Trust you to only notice that!’Jonas said.
                                                    The End

Thats the end for episode 1.What do you think?Is it good or is it bad?Comment please.

To let you find out more about the next story, I will give you a sneak peek now:

‘That was delicious!’ Hudson said.

Find out what will happen to Jonas,Cindy,Hudson and Yu Zhen in the next episode!

(Next week is the released date for Episode 2)

Yours Truly,

Alfwintan





Sneak Peeks of A Music Love Story Ep.1

28 08 2010

Hi guys,

Guess what?I am going to write a story that is long and has many sequels to it!The name of the story is A Music Love Story.The story will be on my blog tomorrow.

but I am going to give you 2 sneak peeks of the brand new story.Both of it are sentences:

While runnning to catch the bus,all of a sudden, a girl dashed out  from the bushes and  hit Jonas.

‘Wow!Cindy is a friendly person!’ Jonas said.’

This are the 2 sneak peeks that I will be giving you.Hope that you will read the story tomorrow!

Yours Truly,

Alfwintan








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