The Day I Went To Play MUD!

16 08 2009

Here is my next story,this is the story that has won the most votes.

Enjoy!

                                        The Day I Went To Play Mud!

 
  It was a rainy day and there was nothing to do.I feel like sleeping but I do not want to as when I am going to sleep,it would always used 30mins to do it,then it would be a waste of time.I had no homework and my exams was over so I could not revise my work and I had read all the storybooks in the bookshop.

  What could I do?I wish the rain would stop!Suddenly,the telephone rang and I rushed over to answer it and it was John,’Hi,Alfwin.Would you come to my house?I got something to tell you and don’t forget to bring your swimming clothes alone’.'….O…k’,I said.

  When I went over to John’s house,I saw alot of shoes outside John’s house and I wondered what was happening.’Knock.knock’I knock John’s front door.John opened the door and told me to come in and I saw alot of people inside.There was Mary,Tom and Aden inside.He brought me this attic and guess what I saw,I saw a gigantic MUD POOL!’Welcome,Alfwin to my mud pool,
please where your raincoat and jumped in and if you do not have googles,we will provide it for you’,John said.’What the heck is this!’I said.’I bought this big pool for $200 and I connect the fresh water from our home and mixed it in our home made mud!’John replied.’Oh,ok’I said.

  After I change into my swimming clothes,I quickly jump to the Mud Pool.’Everybody,our last guest has arrivied and I planed alot of games for you to play’said John.’The first game is called ‘Mudball Fight’,I want you to formed into the group ‘BOYS VS GIRLS’ and everybody will be throwing mud to your opponets and let the game begin’said John.It was very,very fun!

  The next game was called ‘Push your enemy down to the Mud’,what it mean was that you will be in this floating platform which will move and you will have to push your enemy down to the mud. The boys won that round and the final game was called’Don’t Guess the correct number or else mud will come to you’it means that someone will be thinking about a number and you should not guess it  correctlyor else you will get splash my mud.The girls won that round.

  After that,I went home.I had a very fun day.

                                                    The End

Alfwin





My Ultimate Igloo Dance Party

26 07 2009

Hi readers,

This is my first story that I am going to post and the story that I am going to post is supposedto be send to my favourite online game Club Penguin for their annul story writing competition, and this is the URL for club penguin www.clubpenguin.com.  And the moment you have been waiting for……….

                                         My ultimate igloo dance party  

  Dear Diary,

Today I had a very special dance party, it was the best one I have ever had! It all started when………

 

It was a very windy Sunday afternoon, a great time  for a dance party but I was too tired after going hiking with my buddies the day before .I was too bored but I was also too tired ,what could I do? Suddenly, an idea struck me! I knew what could I do, I could call my buddies and ask them to help me organize a dance party and I could even ask my puffles to help out too. It will be the ultimate party ever.

 

I called my buddies to come over to my igloo and help me decorate my igloo. We decorated the igloo with banners and we even make a disco flooring to dance. My puffles(a kind of pet in Club Penguin)  helped me to arrange my stuffs and my good buddy, Smarty1629, was in the kitchen, preparing a feast for the dance party. We had a very jolly good time decorating my igloo and our friendship became stronger but the best is yet to be.

 

When everything was done, we were very happy and finally the time has arrived! “Let’s get the party started! “I shouted. We even had a dance competition to see who is the dancing king or queen of the party. We had a very good time and we all agreed that this was the ultimate igloo dance party ever.

Yours Sincerely,

Alfwin 

If you like the story,tell me about it and I also have my personal blog and the URL is www.alfwintan.wordpress.com.

Yours  Sincerly(again),

Alfwin








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